Sunday, September 19, 2010

Unit 8 blog

How do I feel about comments or lack of comments that have been made to me?

I feel that every comment that has been made to me on my paper is correct. I made several mistakes on my draft and most of it was because I did not proofread it after I wrote it. I was in such a hurry to complete the assignment and I had just gotten this new word program and was not familiar with how to use it. These are all excuses and it got me what I deserved. I did not get as many points for the assignment that I wanted, I think I may have offended William with the word “sissys” being used in my paper, and I had not even noticed that my thesis did not match the paper. I feel the need to apologize for the tone I used in my paper as to men. I have a lot of work to do on my paper, but I hope the discussion board paragraph can show some improvement to at least one of my paragraphs.


1 comment:

  1. Sandy -- it's so interesting how you connected how we raise boys/view masculinity/men's emotions/men's health in this paper. I am thinking it took a turn you did not expect! The mind-body connection....